Friday 20 December 2019
Activity 2: one small step for man
Hello. I have done a poem about when I first set foot on the moon. I have done this because it is the second activity for the summer learning Journey. First I planned it on my planing book so when I was finished planning all I had to do was copy the stuff from my book and type it on to my google draw. I hope you enjoy.
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Wow Merion what a lovely poem. I am so proud of you for attempting this activity and I am so please that your words rhyme, I always find that part of poetry hard. Keep working on the activities. You are a star.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ms Petrus for your kind comment and thank you for your support because it was really hard for me to find words that rhyme so I planned it on my planning book.
ReplyDeleteHave a Merry Christmas and a Happy New year.
kind regards Merion
Malo e lelei Merion,
ReplyDeleteKueni here again from the Summer Learning Journey. I hope you are having a Marvellous Monday!
I really enjoyed reading your blog post this morning about how you would feel if you were in Neil Armstrong's shoes, being the first human to land on the moon. What an awesome poem you have put together, the rhyming you have used is spot on and I really like the way your poem flows.
I really like the line “I have landed on the, what a dangerous thing to do, but if I can, so can you.'' Your poem is very creative and I also really like the images you have used on your poem.
If you travelled to the moon, what is something that you would take with you and leave on the moon as a memoir?
Keep up the hard work, I look forward to reading more of your blog posts!
Kueni :)